Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-27227983-20161127114609/@comment-27227983-20170109090554

Thespoopyman wrote: A bit late, but i'll make a new character anyway.

Name: the little imps Type: small chestnut team Moves: Little friends: summons a low-health small chestnut with 1 move, thump, which does small damage to all zombies. Chestnut tornado: a bunch of small chestnuts spin into a tornado which does damage to and stuns zombies. Green thorns: does damage to every zombie that attacks him this turn. Spiny wheel: attacks all enemies in front of him, and after that they take damage over time. Personality: each chestnut has a different personality. Larry is always ready for action, Gary is mischevious, Mary is shy, and terry is serious. Backstory: before the rp, they all lived alone, but when the slashers came up, they had to gang up (they hate eachother)

Tucker (bull rider zombie) Moves: Charge: does more damage every time it's used. Stomp: does damage to all enemies. Horn spikes: the next ram attack does double damage. Ram: damage is increased by horn spikes. Personality: Tucker seems very distant to most people, but is the exact opposite to his friends, like the little imps. Backstory: for his birthday, his dad got him his bull. But that was the day the slashers appeared, and on that day they killed his dad.

I couldn't understand your wall of text. Please use the enter key. I could see some things that you need to correct though, like:

The names Mary and Larry are already in use. You can't use them.

The names of your moves are too bland. Think of a unique, better name for them.

There are capitalization errors.

Weapon? That is needed.