User blog comment:Lily8763cp/Random Story - Fiery Sparks/@comment-26593304-20170201035150/@comment-26593304-20170201041053

That wasn't as bad as I expected. It was Sap-fling than a Disney movie but that's alright.

I kinda expected them to fight more during the... "reveal" but I guess it's better not to follow up a fight with another fight. Also Boogaloo doesn't seem to have a cool enough personality considering how he acts in-game, but I get that he has that "thing" going on here so it's forgivable. Also, DeviantArt-inspiration? No offense though, I have a friend who claims to be a DeviantArtist.

I hate to be a grammar Nazi, but you might want to double check the text. There's some stuff that doesn't quite make sense.