Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-28270366-20160923232251/@comment-28270366-20161012233512

RodimusPrimeHans-Cuff210 wrote:

Vergel Nikolai wrote:

RodimusPrimeHans-Cuff210 wrote: Basic attack: Jump Shot: Basically a Husk Hop

Atack buffer: Burminate: Increases the team's attack power.

Debuff attack: Flamestrike: The enemy that is hit receives damage over time.

PF1: Fireshot: Unload all ammunition on an enemy and that enemy receives damage over time.

PF2: Flamestorm: Fires a burning Bigger Better Butter at all enemies.

Personality: Doesn't pay attention unless in battle. Likes fire and things that fly. Try being specific please. I can't make abilities up unless I understand the concept. You must indicate stats for your plant. Damage for an attack, turns your buff will last, etc, ect. You get the point. Try making your abilities clear. Jump Shot is Inferno jumping while shooting underneath him, dealing 30 - 60 damage. Burminate lasts for 3 turns. Flamestrike's debuff lasts for 2 turns. Fireshot deals 45 - 75 damage and Flamestorm deals 60 damage. 1. So your basic attack involves you hopping and shooting from above. But isn't that kinda odd that such ability is your main source of offense, involves you hopping in place to place just to shoot kernels to enemies? Also, your damage is a bit OP. Marines have a base damage of 35-45.

2. Burminate does nothing else but power up? If it does, how many percent is the power up? Try being specific.

3. Flamestrike burns enemies? For how many damage per turn? Debuff attacks for pirates and marines involves power downs, that is to weaken your enemy's attack. Try being more specific.

4. Can you rename "Flamestorm" or at least give a different function? Because someone here has taken the term (at least it is called Firestorm) and it involves raining down flames to enemies, kinda like yours.

5. Also, rename "Fire shot", it is preety obvious and a such uncreative name.

Note that this is an RPG, not a shooter game like GW. Rules there don't apply here. So be specific and creative.