Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-26826553-20160601061641/@comment-26826553-20160613153852

Protanly wrote: Enter Hamlet  Hamlet: My my. I know not why, a vegetable farm, I have arrived at.

He glances around. //Er, mate, at least show the real-life shot (e.g., after he says stuff, you show something like "The crazy mental patient mumbles in his cell, walking around" to make it not seem random...look at how we do stuff, mate, we show tha patients imagining while doctors look on by real-life view (For example, a Snapdragon yells "I'm Jack Sparrow!" while the scene shows him in his cell, mumbling like a fool), & not the patients imagination (e.g., what you're doing, it doesn't support or show or imply that he is a mental patient, it just looks like an actor on stage, disconnected from the mental hospital altogether). In short, show how things really are in real life, don't just keep showing the patient's blissful thought without showing the real-life view in which he is seen as just a crazy guy in a cell. And what plant/zombie is Hamlet?