User blog comment:AWPXML/Everything Wrong With Lost City Part 1/@comment-25230228-20150609205733

12 is only true if you want to force a pause.

13 is wrong. It needs to be a period or semicolon.

"A.K.E.E." is correct. You're completely wrong!!!

You CAN HAVE A COMMA before 'because', if you want to force a pause.

Your Cone and Busket references are incorrect, this appears to be in a similar place to WW.

Lost Pilot = just strong. Parasol = sheild. THERE'S THE LOGIC!!!

47: FORCING A PAUSE.

48: FORCING A PAUSE.

50: *facepalm* THEY ARE EXPLORERS. WHAT DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND?! Seriously, it's hard to laugh at the OC when it's completely WRONG. Just...stop.

I'm posting this now to avoid a huge comment...