User blog comment:GamesterD/Plants Vs. Zombies 2 Saga:Ancient Egypt/@comment-26593304-20160509043534

The story is great.

But maybe you could improve the grammar and stuff. (Sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi.) I get that you were probably speed typing it, but if you do that you should return later to fix the stuff. If you want, I'd be happy to be your "editor." ;)