Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-26988423-20160707075019/@comment-26826553-20160713082126

Vergel Nikolai wrote: The Ancient Pult Ancestor wrote: Just a suggestion. Tell me what you think, where I did well, where I went wrong.

Second time they meet, The Terminator & Cyphin battle on bridges, first shooting at one another while riding on parallel bridges, then, when The Terminator leaps on Cyphin's bridge, getting into hand-to-hand, equalled due to The Terminator's upgrades. The Terminator then shatters the bridge's foundations & puts Cyphin out of the story for some time, enough time for him to chase the rest of them without anyone getting in the way.

After some time trying to hunt the twins & avoid the machine, the climax rolls in. When The Terminator comes for Bucky for the third & final time, he & Cyphin (who arrives just in time) lock in combat, & while The Terminator does manage to restrain the T-3000 via his unique electromagnetic field (an electromagnetic energy copy of his arm goes through Cyphin & the wall...while it doesn't do any real damage to him, the arm is enough to restrain him long enough for The Terminator to finish his mission) & prepares to bust his MiniGun on a cornered Bucky (the fight is on a glass skydome rooftop) when The Obliterator arrives & drags Bucky away by the neck, stating that Zomboss is "having him retrieved". The Terminator then battles The Obliterator, Cyphin tells Bucky to go leave him (& rush after the Twins) while he remains restrained on the rooftop as the battle of the two T-850s goes on. The Terminator, who is bested by the fresher machine (The T-850 ZSM-665 unit was created in 400 BCE in a factory underlying Greece, T-850 ZSM-101 emerged from a volcano (camouflaged factory) 150 million years ago), locks eyes with Cyphin for a second & a plan was immediately made as The Terminator releases his grip on Cyphin. The Obliterator is equipped with the same focused electromagnetic upgrades his counterpart made upon himself, which still allows him to fight the T-3000 well, but the two terminators manage to hold him off, & The Terminator, grappling with his foe, shatters the roof, then the whole building as Cyphin escapes, leaving the two terminators under the rubble. The Terminator then emerges long after Cyphin has left the scene, leaving his enemy still breaking through the rubble...

Both the T-850 & the T-3000 appear at the same time, breaking through the wall of a facility as the twins nearly overcome Bucky & Co., both machines saying "I'm back". As Nazis storm in at the same time, Harold & Arthur hold off the Germans while Mineski & Cyphin deal with Frostthorn, The Terminator & Bucky dealing with Blazethorn (despite the fact that he's with the primary target, The Terminator experiences a mission override, since the Twins are higher up on his programmed kill list than Bucky is). Despite the easiness of the task due to their superior strengths over the twins, whenever they seem to kill a twin, the twin just regenerates, & they realize the "separation weakness". They battle the twins, pushing them farther & farther away from one another.

The twins want power, right? Well, let them die by power overdose.

Since T-3000s have the 1% chance to convert other people to T-3000s, the latest & most powerful terminator in existence as of the moment, Mineski manages to pin down Frostthorn, while Cyphin infects her by turning his hand into a sword & stabbing her in the mouth. The 99% chance of conversion failure wins, of course, & Frostthorn's cells turns into pixels, which then blow up, showing that the conversion failed, exactly as planned. Now she's nothing, not even dust, wiped from existence.

Bucky & The Terminator use their freeze & flame powers to bombard Blazethorn, causing her to suffer thermal shock due to the changing temperature (hot, cold, hot, cold, etc.) exerting extreme stress on her body & weakening her. The Winter Soldier uses his ice to forcefully keep Blazethorn's mouth wide open, while The Terminator, with The Spirit Of Vengeance taking over him, fires a charged shot of hellfire (like laser) down Blazethorn's throat to "feed" her (yeah, got that thing from the 2014 Godzilla movie, where Goji poured his atomic breath down the female M.U.T.O.'s mouth, as if he's saying "You like radiation, right? FEAST ON THIS!"), the extreme power eating at her sins & denying her of the right to exist, thus, in effect, destroying her essence entirely, like what befell her sister. A second before The Terminator does that, have Bucky, who understands what's going to happen, say something like "You want to feast on power, right? Well, this machine here will help you. FEAST ON THIS, YOU GREEDY B***H!" or something like that.

Well, we know the ending. The threat gone, The Terminator & Cyphin return to the future. Before that, it seemed like The Terminator will attempt to finally destroy his target, but, when Bucky promises to not be evil, to not attack Suburbia, a promise he would hold, the timeline in which Bucky attacks Suburbia fades away, along with it the events in which Dave programs The Terminator his mission to kill The Winter Soldier. No longer having any further purpose in the 40s, The Terminator leaves. The threat to Mineski finally gone, Cyphin returns to the future because "he has further missions", leaving the team. Before leaving, The Terminator tells Bucky, & at the same time, Cyphin tells Mineski, three words: "We'll meet again."

Then you can have The Winter Soldier set his "Suicide Squad" (well, you did say you planned to have them be like the Suicide Squad). The credits roll. By the post-credits...the post-credits is a secret I'll withhold from you...It's something that will set up an RP I plan...

 This plan is just a draft. Some stuff might change...

The second meeting will happen after the team prevents the Twins to successfully assassinate Stalin, then the twins kidnapped Stalin and moved to Moscow. The second meeting will happen on a bridge, and I want that the Terminator has some long range explosive gun to separate Bucky from the group. Bucky will then arrive at the frozen wasteland same as where he was sending a message. He finally remembered the final glyph and both the Terminator and Obliterator cornered him, but gets distracted by each other. Bucky then escapes, Mineski came to search him and found him, both teleports to the Kremlin where the Twins built the Cryogenium Rod and Iron Curtain, and then Cyphin joins the gang fighting them at the climax.

In the climax, they need to destroy the Iron Curtain inside the psionic barrier it produce to protect the Kremlin. Mineski goes to find the power generators and hack it so the Iron Curtain destabilizes. He finds a van that has him rushing to the generators while getting chased by Robpt Gargs. And Randolf came to assist him as he sits from a far range, sniping every bad guy he sees. As the barrier destabilizes, Bucky and the rest enter the structure and fight the twins army of 8-bit Trojan Viruses (remember when they stole Mineski's energy). There are also some Nazis storming the structure, which Randolf sniped them all from afar. As they fight, Harold attempted to send Mineski inside the rod to destroy it. But unfortunately, he got killed. As revenge, Arthur shoots recklessly at them. Mineski however, successfully hacked the rod and destroys it. This enraged the twins. And have them fusing into one person. A strong Frostfire cactus that brawled with them for... 3 minutes. Mineski asked help from DIRT, gives him a Graviton Mine, and planted it on their chest. The twins split up and are thrown far away from each other.

In the final battle, Mineski and Cyphin fought Frostthorn, and Bucky, Arthur, and the Terminator fought Blazethorn. Like you said, Cyphin converted Frostthorn into a T-3000 which lead to turning him to nothing but pixels. But in a PG-13 way, instead of stabbing, I'll had Mineski ensnare him on a stasis net, then Cyphin used his BCS (if that won't work, his hands) produces the same shocks that transformed him. As Frostthorn disintegrates, Fairy's shadow plants (yep, I forgot they are in the story) encase the remaining bits of Frostthorn in the Pandora's Bark. Erasing herself from the brink of history.

As for Blazethorn, she uses anything he can, and taunts Bucky about not having a father. She also admits that she killed his father. Enraged, Bucky's eyes turned blue and strengthen the blizzard around them. Turned his both arms into solid ice. In a final strike, Blazethorn decided to use the Halberd of Death at them, but ran out of energy as she is about to cast. Arthur sent her a barrage of bullets, the Terminator ripped her tear to tear, then Bucky finishes her it a "Falcon Punch" from his cryovibranium alloy arm. The shadow plants then encase every last piece of Blazethorn, erasing them completely from existence.

And in the ending, you already said above. But as final remarks in Cyphin and Mineski's final meeting, Cyphin gave him one last minute as a father. He gaved Mineski the last surviving blueprint of the Cryogwnium Rod and the gameboy he promised Mineski since he was a kid. Mineski hugged Cyphin and cried, and Cyphin gave him a pat on the back. DIRT cries for Cyphin.

And then the Zombified Squad (I named them after the Suicide Squad, but none of them will act like the original ones. Not a DC fan. Also it doesn't mean you named something that is a reference, it means that it will look like the original) walked to the sunset onto a new era. With new missions. And an epilogue made by Cyphin is spoken. He is seen fighting robotic punks, saying "The Winter Soldier will be back.". DIRT turns off the screen.

How is this?

1.) He won't be using a gun. He'll use an RPG-7, a grenade launcher, which will ought to do the trick. 2.) I'd still say that he stabs her in the head, then shock her. No problem eith that brutality, since terminators usually do the most brutal of actions just to do the job outright. 3.) Still think the 2 vs. Cactus thing is better. Having three go against a Cactus while 2 attack the other is a bit unsymmetrical. 4.) I'm thinking that, for the fight, one will be draining the shadows of the storming Nazis, two help power up the good guys fighting the cacti, another two slowly drain the cacti's power. 5.) It would be best if, for some time, Blazethorn fights Bucky alone. For example, they fight near an elevator, Bucky & Blazethorn get in the elevator without The Terminator, & the Cactus cuts the cords so the elevator falls. Or maybe she brings down a wall. Either way, she seperates herself & Bucky from the T-850 unit so she can deal with him alone. At one point, she then prepares to stab Bucky with the halberd, but Bucky grabs it with his empowered cryo-v arm, & destroys the halberd by crushing it with his fist, weakening her. He then beats her up in various displays & emphasis of his new power. At that point, The Terminator finally rejoins the fight, & both beat up Blazethorn. The Terminator then shoves his hand in her mouth & fires blue flames of heaven (The Spirit Of Vengeance was originally the Angel Of Justice, explaining the presence of the blue angelic flames stronger than hellfire) down her throat, Godzilla style (I really want to do that part). He then shoves a firebomb down her guts, with the force of the blast throwing her right into Bucky's arm, which goes through her stomach & freezes her. Bucky then says something about vengeance or justice being served, or says that she finally got the power she wanted sprouting through her guts, then pulls the arm back, causing the Cactus to shatter to bits, the shadows of which get sucked by Fairy's shadow hunters. In short, overkill. First, you get beaten by a frozen arm, get flames from heaven fired down your throat, a firebomb shoved in your guts, & finally, a frozen metal hand punching through your stomach...Overkill! 6.) A similar thing might happen with the other side. Frostthorn seperates herself & Mineski from Cyphin so they could go one-on-one with no stupid machine to get in the way. Then when Mineski overpowers her, Cyphin rejoins the fight & infects her with machine-phase matter with the head-stab shock, as planned. The machine-phase matter then drives her mad & dissolves her (that's the effect of m.p. matter 99% of the time...it won't convert you into a T-3000, it would consume you & destroy you), while the shadows suck her, well, shadows, same as with her sister. I suggest we put this fight first before we show Bucky's, or show the events all at the same time. 7.) Stalin gets his memory wiped away, because there's no way he could live with the knowledge of plants & zombies screwing the world up. 8.) First, Cyphin gives Mineski a weapon & tells him to push a hidden button or switch (or channel his energy) to make it smaller & more portable & concealable. When that is done, the weapon transforms into its non-obvious concealable, portable version: a fully-functional gameboy. 9.) After that, I handle the credits, then the post-credits to tease my upcoming RP (Marvel is a big fan of post-credit teasers).