Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-26574738-20170905125826/@comment-32530873-20170907211701

Name: foreman 444

Personally: very untrusting of people because once you get to know him you probably understand why and will protect his friend drone 357 at all costs

Backstory: all foremen of the zevics are meant to be female right? Well not this one because of this he is a outcasts and stuck with the most basic creatures and on the worst job possible for a "queen" the supplie run

Weapon: other than his ability to shoot acid and his bone like wings he can lay eggs to spawn minions like drone or strikes but nothing Elsa because of his low rank

Crush: ok you think that a huge bug creature that's a dude and ment to be a girl is going to have a crush..... maybe

Universe of origin: droning on (inspired by starcraft)

Does this seem ok also what do you think of the grammar any better?