User blog comment:Brainulator9/20K edits/@comment-24828059-20150818142537/@comment-1764483-20150818143422

Let's play teacher and grade this piece of crap. Since it's really short, let's say 10 points off for every error out of a possible 100. So, okay, you ready? Here we go. Well, first of all, congratulation's spelled wrong. But, it's not even a simple typo; 2 letters in 2 different places are wrong, which probably means they really didn't know how to spell it. So that's 20 points off for that, just because it's such an atrocious misspelling. But then, why isn't it plural? You don't usually say "Congratulation!", you say "Congratulations!", so, technically, that's nothing to do with the spelling. It's a different error altogether. So, that's another 10 points for that. Then, "You've completed a great game"? Well, that's just simply wrong; 20 points for that statement. Even if it was a great game, it shouldn't have to announce it. So, then, you have a punctuation error, because the next sentence begins with "and". Then, you've got an extra O in "prooved". And proved what? "Proved the justice of our culture"? So, it's saying that you proved that our culture has justice? I don't know. "Now go and rest our heroes!" instead of "Now go and rest," comma, "our heroes!" It's telling you to go rest our heroes.

Okay, well, sorry to say, but we had to take off 90 points. But, hey, a score of 10% means that there's still hope. But, wait. Is there any reason that there's 1 exclamation mark here and then there's 3 up there? That's another 10 points off for lack of consistency with a total score of 0. F-. It should have said, "Congratulations! You had the patience to sit through this awful game. You proved your nerdiness. Now go f**k yourself!"