User blog comment:Lily8763cp/Random Story - Fiery Sparks/@comment-27385163-20170209001610/@comment-26593304-20170213034355

Well, what if we are "children?"

I understand your reasons behind arguing against this, and I can definitely respect that you don't like this writing style; I totally see why. My problem isn't that you hate this style, but that as a result of hating it you tell people to stop using it. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it.

I won't argue that the style needs to develop; That's true. But also consider how long she's been writing in this style - in terms of literary history, it isn't a lot. It's certainly unrefined. But there will always be flaws in any given style of any given profession, and prose, for the many works that use it, isn't perfect. We're willing to support her because we believe in using this style and we enjoy her writing. Personally, the natural tendency is that things get better, not worse, however I won't deny that that is unfortunately the case sometimes.

Also, there's no harm in doing things simply. Heck, from what I've seen, making things more complicated generally neither helps nor hinders.