Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-27227983-20170603025806/@comment-27227983-20170605114153

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Character Name: Flamedrag

Class: Cardsharp

Abilities:

1. Offensive: Fireballs: Shoots multi-fireballs to the enemies, deals 30% splash damages. Deal double damage to ice or wood enemies.

2. Debuff: '''Burnin' Time! :''' Increases the attack power for 15%

3. Special: '''Tit for Tat! :''' Increases the attack power for 40% but loses 20% of his current health.

Adrenaline Ability: Dragon Rage: Deal 125% damage to all enemies.

Personality: Joyful, clever, and a bit of jokey.

Background: Anything could happen, he knows. He soon left his family to look for a journey. He was a bit surprised that he could go this far. He once realized that, he got the power of nature. "Live with the nature," he said, "and the whole universe will help you to touch you dream." //Issues:


 * Fireballs: Does this just hit one enemy? SPECIFY or change.


 * How is increasing attack damage a debuff? It's the complete opposite of it. Change it.


 * Tit for Tat is NOT a special ability. It's a buff at best, that's similar to Swindler's Gambit (Baron's). Change it.


 * Adrenaline Ability: What do you mean by 125% damage? Be SPECIFIC.


 * Personality: Check.

// To be honest, I don't think that this RPG fits you...
 * Background: Vague and doesn't really make a lot of sense. Change it.

(Cable Car 3 | Cipher Jules)

Ayers: It's headed to the Northern Border. Once we got off, we'd be on our own with where to go in the New World.

While Ayers and Cipher were chatting, the man in the brown polo checked his pocket watch, gets up, and leaves to the fourth Cable Car for their own reasons.

Ayers: *Looks out the window* I think we're close to the Borders by now. *Yawns, and looks back at Cipher Jules* I'll probably not be seeing you for a bit because, to be honest, I plan on going solo since most of the people here are Level 1. Good luck in advance, you're going to need it.

(Cable Car 2 | Wicket)

Wicket uses the slot machine, and places in 5 tokens. He gets:

Moonstone Stetson (Rare Headgear): ''Part of the Eclipse Slinger set. It's a white western hat with a refined, glowing moonstone on it's front. When worn, it floats a few inches above the wearer's head.''

Gives: +50 Life and +10 Toughness.

Should he put it on?

Possible Interactions:


 * Go to a different Cable Car. (Specify which Cable Car.)

(Cable Car 3 | Sukuna)

Sukuna gains two food items:

1 Bottled Water: Reduces all debuffs' durations by 1 turn for the consumer. Can be used twice before being fully consumed.

1 Meatballs: Heals consumer by 20 Life. Can be used up to 5 times before being fully consumed.

Possible Interactions:


 * Go to a different cable car. (Specify which Cable Car.)

An annoucement coming from a speaker in each Cable Car plays. It's from the driver in the Locomotive.

''Testing, testing, 1, 2, 3. Okay... Passangers, the destination is near. You will arrive to the Northern Border shortly. ''

By next turn, the players will arrive and leave the train. From there, the players are to explore the New World on their own. K. Done. //Still has problems.


 * Fireballs is too overpowered, I'll make it only hit 1 enemy for 25 and splash damage will just be 20% of the original damage input.


 * Burning Time is just an attack that just auto-targets the enemy with the highest Strength. It is still not a debuff. A debuff ability is an ability that gives a negative effect (Examples: Stat decrease, burning, stunned, etc.) to it's target that lasts for a certain number of turns. Change it.


 * Cardsharps don't have special abilities! No class does, since there's no ability that's called a "Special Ability". Change Storming Blast into an effect ability.


 * Your Adrenaline Ability is fine...


 * Personality: From Flamedrag's background, it doesn't really relate. This personality is out of place, change it to fit the Background or change the Background instead.


 * Background: Doesn't really make any sense.


 * And, your character doesn't really sound like they'll even BE a Cardsharp! If you're going to pick a class, at least have the character make sense to the class they pick.

//As I said, I don't really think this RPG suits you. You'll have 1 more try to edit your character, but if it still isn't done correctly, any more attempts will be considered as spam.