Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-32632608-20170921045012/@comment-32632608-20170921111237

// *In a drained voice* Spell things right and have proper capitalisation...

//I'm having standards for this one, so here. I have a few issues with your character.

Psyches should have more description! If you're making one, please make them authentic and interesting, not some dark souls knock off. Be more creative with this.

There's no background... Maybe you should have finished before posting it here? Just a little suggestion.

Appearance: ...This is just too vague. Add more! And, lab coat guy having a makeshift crusader as a Psyche? I don't see a connection. At least with Reiseda, Pestilence has some sort of connection. (Both having sickness as their theme.)

Personality: "He talks a lot", wow, I can really feel a character with him. *Obvious sarcasm is obvious.

Psyche's Ability: Physical based, then?

//Until you resolve these issues and apply proper spelling and capitalisation, your character will not be entered. Sorry if the critism sounds harsh, but I hate characters that are nothing more than blank slates.