User blog comment:GamesterD/PvZ Heroes Saga Issue 1/@comment-30588401-20161019083831/@comment-26988423-20161020103709

I thought you were taking after Lily.

Gamester, I suggest formatting the speech in bullet points. New bullet each time there's a change of character talking. Action asterisks are probably a good idea as well.

Foxtail, if you don't like the style then leave. No one has to follow your style of what you think is the "correct" style of litreature.

That includes me, so of course Gamester doesn't have to take my advice on the subject.