Board Thread:Literature/@comment-31155876-20170419223058

A story I made about a sad Chomper. Read and try not to cry. (if you're wondering this is intended to be cheesy)

''There was once a young (but not too young) Chomper who lived in a fine little burrow by Neighborville. He was living a happy young life, after he had finally moved out of his mother's basement and acquired his own home. Along with cooking, he was quite into video games, seen as how half of his burrow was taken up by rare game cartrigdes on his shelves and new, fresh-off-the-market gaming systems hooked up to his flatscreen 24/7.''

''What he loved most, however, was his computer in his room. It was a desktop with an extremely powerful potato micro chip, a rare, not yet released motherGourd with gaming power from the Far-Far Future that no one else could ever dream of. With "Fog" (an online gaming platform) installed on his computer, he had many fun, life-wasting games installed on his Fog account, which he play for hours on end.''

''He also established many online friendships with other people across the Earth, but his best friend was a Fog user dubbed as "P345H00T3R." They would always spend the whole day every Saturday playing their favorite gaming picks (since those were the only days they normally got off their jobs) such as "Brawlcauli" "HotPotatoline Miami" and "Humans vs. Zombies."''

''One day however, Chomper got the day off from his job (due to an incident with a former employee) on a Friday, which meant that he got to stay home all day. He tried to take a nap on his couch after eating a bowl of Zombie-Os, but he just couldn't fall asleep. It was like his PC was saying... "come Chomper, come play with me!" So he got up and went and sat down in his chair, facing his desktop. He wasn't sure what to play, but he decided on his personal favorite game "Bean Fortress 2."''

''He booted it up and got into an online match. Everything was normal so far. He was having fun when suddenly, the user "Z0M8135RUL3" joined and typed into the chat something that changed Chomper forever...''

"henlo chomper"

"hello you STINKY CHOMPER"

"go eat a zombie, ugly"

''Chomper stopped playing. His throat began to heat up, as if he was going to choke. He didn't know why, but those words struck through his poor soul like a Line Dancing Zombie. He fell on the ground and began to wail. What was going on?!''

To be continued. Maybe. Probably not.

Criticism is appreciated. 