User blog comment:PeaVZ108/Rap About PvZH Superpowers/@comment-24951189-20170916070309

Not a bad rap there, 108 Some feedback on which to meditate:

"Cut em' Down to Size, a real small size." - "Size" twice in the same line? Keep you eye on the prize. It's not the easiest rhyme to do, this I realize, but your rap needs a sharp flow, so synthesize a lyric that cuts sharp like whirling scythes. (Same thing with "up" in the first two lines. For more diversity the audience pines.)

"Summoning's the best way to expand your army, So if you don't have friends, don't go crying to your mummy!" That rhyme just doesn't work. (Sorry to alarm ye) In face, you would have been better off using "mommy." Don't mean to be rude, please don't harm me. I just hope you'll find lyrics to charm me!