User blog comment:Lily8763cp/Random Story - Fiery Sparks/@comment-27385163-20170209001610/@comment-27385163-20170213032215

You guys are acting like children. I don't just do this to be negative, this is a genuine writing style that just needs to stop.

It's very simplistic and doesn't require much effort compared to descriptive writing.

I don't just HATE things because I can, I believe in good literature, but overstuffing lily with support with a writing style that definitely needs some improvement won't make her improve, at all. If anything, get worse if the support is just that simple.