Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-27227983-20170508025703/@comment-27227983-20170519051019

Fancyplanty wrote: Pumpkin Pro wrote: CaptainRustbolt21 wrote: Name: Zteven

Gender: Male

Age: Imp

Species: Zombie

Personality: Nice and comical (general), serious and destructive (Z-8 Avenger)

Backstory: Having decided to go on vacation, Zteven went back to the past to join the zombies to aid the battle... with the power of PUNS!

Apperance: typical Z7 imp, but with black and orange shoulder pads and Z-11 Suppresors have a golden tint.

Special Ability: can call in his Z-Mech when the time is right.

//Zteven is like a joke character. I'm trying to have this be a serious RP, not a random one. And his special abiliy isn't really one at all and the backstory is vague. Fix that. Same goes for Juan. (Fancyplanty) //vague? Well, I think Juan's backstory is pretty serious 2 me compared to Cirno's. At least he tells the past. But I'm trying to revise it. Oh, and is my Juan's special ability okay?

//The backstory is OK but its up to you if you want to revise it. The problem with Juan is his special ability. Being an "alchemist in training" is more of a rank than an actual ability.