Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-26826553-20160320114204/@comment-27227983-20160406113629

The Ancient Pult Ancestor wrote: Fairy27 wrote: The Ancient Pult Ancestor wrote: Well, Fairy, if I screw up, just tell me where I went wrong...

Here's a rough sketch for my Shady Viola, which will most probably only appear in Fright Night.

In the dream, Violet meets her shadowy counterpart Teloiv, who seems to be identical to her in nearly every way. Teloiv, who is about to get killed in some way, begs Violet to help her. When they do, she begs Violet to let her & her friends to take her with them as they try to escape, & they say yes.

Then later on, in a scene, Teloiv leads the group into trouble, revealing her mischievous side. Before they fall into a chasm, Violet begs to Teloiv, just as how she begged for them to help her. Teloiv just laughs as they fell.

Teloiv walks away laughing. But she then gets driven to depression due to a combination of conscience & the strong bond of friendship she developed with the kids. She then returns to save them from a bunch of monsters (Nightmare plants, perhaps), telling them to leave before she seems to get "killed" by the Nightmare Plants.

Sometime later, a depressed Violet meets Teloiv by the end of the story, & the thing may go two ways:

a.) Teloiv is mortally wounded. She & Violet share one last moment together before she expires. Violet mourns over her friend as she finally gets purified, sobbing over the fact that she could have brought Teloiv with her into the real world & thus could have been close friends.

b.) Teloiv is alive & only slightly wounded, but she has to go her separate way. She & Violet share one last moment together & a tearful farewell before Violet & friends leave for the real world, while Teloiv either stays in the nightmare world or goes home to shadow land.

There may be a good chance Teloiv may not be RP-exclusive, but so far, she just doesn't seem that much of a good character to keep inserting into RPs. a.) With that strong bond of friendship, Teloiv can be purified into a normal Shrinking Violet. Is she dies before the purification is done, then she is not purified and instead completed the death process. If you want to get her back, tell me, so that I can do a scene on reviving Shady Violas.

b. ) Either in the nightmare world or to the Land of Shadows...It's best if Teloiv goes to the Land of Shadows, though.

Overall, neat sketch, but how can Teloiv be wounded (It has to be either ice, or any attack as long as metal jam was played) at first, maybe you're in under construction for now. Metal horror music playing in the background. Something like the theme of Saw, or the metallic screeching of the Nightmare Plants being considered metal jam. I mean, unless you really wanna mean "THE metal jam", then maybe any loud metal clanging can defeat them (I got the idea from Spider Man 3, where Spider Man defeated Venom by clanging metal. The symbiote cannot stand loud noises like bells & metal bars going CLANG). Or maybe the chasm Violet & friends fall into is a chasm of ice, where the temperature is under zero degrees.

Another idea I have: anyone know "The Krang" of Ninja Turtles? I plan to make guys based on those...

I know about those.