User blog comment:Plant Protecter/Fanfiction: Journey to the Centre of Hollow Earth/@comment-27385163-20171003050105

i don't like the writing style where the character says something, and the actions is done with asterisks.

comes off as a roleplay, but even then, i've seen erotic roleplays that actually are written to the point, it felt like it was written by 1 person to be read like a book.

i mean, the fan fiction is ok, but the writing style is just not something i'd go with if you want to write more fan fictions.