Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-28270366-20170406111602/@comment-28270366-20170521110019

ThingOfTheStrangeMan wrote:

Name: Hyloth The Ring Of Domination

Plant Species: Dark Matter Dragonfruit

Lore: Hyloth is part of an ancient order that focuses on subduing any threats &  any anomalies that happen to the world having noticed the time glitch the order has sent Hyloth to the battlefield to stop the anomaly & subdue the threat that attempts to control it.

Gear:

Dominators Helmet (Headgear) Increases attack

Dominators Chestplate (Bodygear) Increases defense & hp along with attack

Dominators Greaves (Leg Gear) Increases attack & defense

Spear of the Dominator (Weapon) Increases attack

Trait:

Ring of The Dominator: Hyloth gains a ring that floats around him all minions inside the radius of Hyloths ring gain an attack buff enemies inside the ring receive a speed debuff and receive a DoT

Abilities:

Cruel Lotus: Hyloth attacks all enemies around him if more then 2 are hit they are rooted and receive a DoT

Warcry of the Dominator: All minions in Hyloths ring receive an attack speed increase and will focus attacks on an enemy of Hyloths choice that are near them

Spear of Pursuit: Hyloth throws his spear at an enemy dealing damage and marking them enemies marked by Hyloth will receive a attack speed and movement decrease & upon death will give all enemies minions in the lane an attack speed and attack increase

Ultimate:

Avatar of Domination: All enemies in Hyloths lane receive a major debuff to all stats this includes heroes and minions also if any enemies are killed while they have this debuff all ally’s gain a minor attack speed movement speed and attack boost

Also i checked the battleground for the desert place and it seems that the last post was 2 days ago might want to update the combat there

//I'll ve updating that thread, after I react to your character. Also, it has been a long time...

Your fear and lore are good to go...


 * Trait: Ring of Dominator - So this is like an area minion buff. I add something like "mercenary camps receive 30% more damage and are captured 50% faster" because you dominate them.


 * Cruel Lotus - I think making this as a normal root/DoT ability is good to go.


 * Warcry of the Dominator - This thing is just a buff, right? Also, the taunt will be to a chosen target. Good to go.


 * Spear of Pursuit - I'm a bit confused about this (maybe because of your lack of punctuation marks?). So you deal damage and mark the enemy you hit, then giving them reduced movement and attack speed decrease. How about giving yourself a bonus move and attack speed while the mark is on. And the part that you said enemy minions are granted bonus attack damage and speed blew me alot. Maybe you meant ally minions?


 * Ultimate: Avatar of Domination - OK, this is a bit OP. So this will only give a boost of attack damage, attack speed and movement speed to all ally units in Hyloth's lane. The entire "every enemy killed will give buff" part is just OP.

//Ok, to confirm, yoy are a Tactician. I was thinking you are a support, but your buffs focuses more on minions and the lane so I gave you a more strategic role for this character.

//Go ahead to my Desert Oasis thread and choose a side...