Board Thread:Plants vs. Zombies Heroes/@comment-25083348-20171228001635/@comment-24951189-20180121200806

LordHelix990 wrote: ///I solemnly confirm that I have been working on a terrible PvZH/PvZGW fanfic. Oh, today there's a History pack. I don't know if it's worth opening or not, since last time I opened one of these kinds of packs(the last pack I opened was the Gravestone one) I got a bunch of useless Uncommons(and the ones that were useful like Zombot Drone Engineer I already had four of) and Sumo Wrestler.

So I'm saving up 750 gems, should I use them for Nightcap or Neptuna? Here's my two cents: your fanfic is really good, and it's nice to see you experimenting. You have some good setups, a good foundational story. Your work clearly comes from a place of passion. You also know how to work in some imagination to your world-building, with mention of things the characters interact with. You also have some good comedy mixed in, like the Rustbolt gadget section.

That being said, there is one area you can improve upon, that being your character dialouge. Try pretending that you are the character, and ask youself "How would this personality in this situation choose their words." Tiny inflections and tones are small and subtle, but they're one of the two things that tend to seperate good fanfics from the outstanding ones. The other thing is story pacing, which comes to a writer more naturally over time. Keep up the good work!

As for the hero choice, (as always) it depends. Nightcap is good at making sudden pushes with environments, Astro-Shroom and Admiral Navy Bean, but he runs into trouble against Hearty zombies and Gravestones. His best deck is the Faceblaster 9000, which is a blast to play with. Neptuna has some good community Grave decks that use relatively common cards, but her cross-tribe synergy isn't phenominal. Both heroes have hit-or-miss superpowers. I'd say go with Nightcap, but you should go with whatever you prefer.