Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-27227983-20170210121203/@comment-27227983-20170211115924

AngryBirds&#039;sSuperFan wrote: //Sign as:

Name: Skyshooter

Nickname/Title (Optional): Sky-P or Skype

Plant/Zombie Type: Skyshooter

Backstory: He is the only Peashooter who wants to fly. And, he did that well.

Appearance: Here:

Personality: He hates to share it.

Weapon: Peas and his scarf.

//Here are my comments:


 * The backstory and personality are too vague. Try adding more things that will give us a bigger insight on your character


 * You... You can't use the name of the species as the plant's actual name. A name should be the actual name of the plant, not the species. Would you be happy if you were named Human?


 * What can his scarf do? Does it have special properties? If not then... It really isn't a weapon, but instead, more of a vanity accesory.


 * The profile of your character makes it look like that they are just a random background character. Try adding more diversity to it to avoid your creation from being too bland and vague.

//For now, you are not in for these reasons.